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		<title>CCSS Language Progressive Skills Standards</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Dec 2011 17:57:50 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Language Strand has been one of the most controversial components of the COMMON CORE STATE STANDARDS FOR ENGLISH LANGUAGE ARTS &#038; LITERACY IN HISTORY/SOCIAL STUDIES, SCIENCE, AND TECHNICAL SUBJECTS. One of these components stirring up heated debate has been the Language Progressive Skills document.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One controversial component of the COMMON CORE STATE STANDARDS FOR ENGLISH LANGUAGE ARTS &amp; LITERACY IN HISTORY/SOCIAL STUDIES, SCIENCE, AND TECHNICAL SUBJECTS has been the <strong>Language Strand</strong>. The Language Strand consists of the following for each grade level: Conventions of Standard English (Standards 1 &amp; 2), Knowledge and Use (Standard 3), and Vocabulary Acquisition and Use (Standards 4, 5, &amp; 6).</p>
<p>The main point of contention, of course, has been the inclusion of Language as a separate strand with grammar, usage, and conventions divorced from writing instruction and vocabulary divorced from reading instruction.</p>
<p>In fact, the writers of the Common Core State Standards (CCSS) go out of their away to alleviate the fears of writing-based and literature-based devotees with the following disclaimer: <span style="color: #0000ff;">“The inclusion of Language standards in their own strand should not be taken as an indication that skills related to conventions, effective language use, and vocabulary are unimportant to reading, writing, speaking, and listening; indeed, they are inseparable from such contexts (51).”</span><a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf"> http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a></p>
<p>A second issue has received far less attention than the aforementioned point of contention in curricular mapping committees and ELA forums, but has created more rumblings in the educational publishing world. This second issue will perhaps have a greater impact than the first on classroom instruction.</p>
<p>In the Language Strand, at the end of both the K-5 (p. 30) and 6-12 (p. 56) Language Standards is a document titled “Language Progressive Skills, by Grade” with this subheading: <span style="color: #0000ff;">“The following skills, marked with an asterisk (*) in Language standards 1–3, are particularly likely to require continued attention in higher grades as they are applied to increasingly sophisticated writing and speaking.”<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/Common-Core3.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-2574" title="Common Core" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/Common-Core3-300x102.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="102" /></a></span></p>
<h5><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>CCSS Language Progressive Skills Standards</strong></span></h5>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">&#8230;..</span></p>
<ol>
<li><strong>L.3.1f. </strong>Ensure subject-verb and pronoun-antecedent agreement.</li>
<li><strong>L.3.3a. </strong>Choose words and phrases for effect.</li>
<li><strong>L.4.1f. </strong>Produce complete sentences, recognizing and correcting inappropriate fragments and run-ons.</li>
<li><strong>L.4.1g. </strong>Correctly use frequently confused words (e.g., <em>to/too/two; there/their</em>).</li>
<li><strong>L.3.3a. </strong>Choose words and phrases for effect.</li>
<li><strong>L.4.3b. </strong>Choose punctuation for effect.</li>
<li><strong>L.5.1d. </strong>Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in verb tense.</li>
<li><strong>L.5.2a. </strong>Use punctuation to separate items in a series.†</li>
<li><strong>L.6.1c. </strong>Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in pronoun number and person.</li>
<li><strong>L.6.1d. </strong>Recognize and correct vague pronouns (i.e., ones with unclear or ambiguous antecedents).</li>
<li><strong>L.6.1e. </strong>Recognize variations from standard English in their own and others’ writing and speaking, and identify and use strategies to improve expression in conventional language.</li>
<li><strong>L.6.2a. </strong>Use punctuation (commas, parentheses, dashes) to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements.</li>
<li><strong>L.6.3a. </strong>Vary sentence patterns for meaning, reader/listener interest, and style.‡</li>
<li><strong>L.6.3b. </strong>Maintain consistency in style and tone.</li>
<li><strong>L.7.1c. </strong>Place phrases and clauses within a sentence, recognizing and correcting misplaced and dangling modifiers.</li>
<li><strong>L.7.3a. </strong>Choose language that expresses ideas precisely and concisely, recognizing and eliminating wordiness and redundancy.</li>
<li><strong>L.8.1d. </strong>Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in verb voice and mood.</li>
<li><strong>L.9</strong>–<strong>10.1a. </strong>Use parallel structure.</li>
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<h5><strong><span style="color: #800000;">Analysis and Implications of the CCSS Language Progressive Skills Standards</span></strong></h5>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">&#8230;..</span></p>
<p>No Vocabulary Acquisition and Use (Standards 4, 5, &amp; 6) are included-only Conventions of Standard English (Standards 1 &amp; 2), Knowledge and Use (Standard 3). <span style="color: #0000ff;">In other words, grammar, usage, and conventions warrant this second document.</span> <span style="color: #0000ff;">Compared to previous state standard documents, the CCSS sees these components as specific building blocks to literacy, and not just incidental outcomes learned by some mysterious form of academic osmosis.</span></p>
<p>Of the 18 CCSS Language Progressive Skills Standards, 14 are Grade 3-6 Standards. <span style="color: #0000ff;">Clearly the writers of the CCSS have chosen to notch up the rigor of previous state standards by devolving most of the heavy instructional lifting of grammar, usage, and conventions skills to elementary teachers.</span></p>
<p>The CCSS defines grammar, usage, and conventions as “skills.” Skills are to be applied to the writing craft. <span style="color: #0000ff;">National Writing Project, Writers Workshop, and Writing Process advocates have been loath to accept this skills/craft instructional distinction.</span></p>
<p>Tacit acknowledgement is made that these grammar, usage, and conventions skills must be reviewed at each grade level. <span style="color: #0000ff;">In other words, the cyclical nature of skills acquisition is affirmed. Unlike many previous state standards documents, the CCSS writers seem to get the fact that “Rome wasn’t built in a day.” The examples in Appendix A of the CCSS document are helpful in this regard.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">Although the writers of the CCSS document have been careful to leave methodological autonomy to teachers, the inclusion of a separate language strand, the labeling of grammar, usage, and conventions as “skills,” and the review component of the 18 Langauge Progressive Skills Standards certainly promote some means of both direct and differentiated instruction in the Standards themselves.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">The grammar, usage, and conventions skills require deep instruction, not just review practice, as with <span style="color: #000000;">Daily Oral Language</span> or <span style="color: #000000;">Daily Language Review</span> methodologies. And that means intensive, direct instruction and guided practice following an instructional sequence that includes the review components as scaffolding to build onto with new skills. Periodic “mini-lessons” are just not going to cut it. Each of the 18 Language Progressive Skills Standards cries out for diagnostic assessments and differentiated instruction for the sake of instructional efficiency and individual mastery.</span></p>
<p>For upper elementary, middle school, and high school teachers looking at a stand-alone grammar, mechanics, and spelling curriculum that is aligned to the language strand of Common <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TGM-Thumbnail1.jpg"><img class="alignright  wp-image-2575" title="TGM Thumbnail" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TGM-Thumbnail1.jpg" alt="" width="122" height="122" /></a>Core State Standards, please check out the author’s <strong><em><a href="../../../../../../grammar-mechanics/teaching-grammar-and-mechanics.html">Teaching Grammar and Mechanics</a></em></strong>. Throw away the ineffective <a href="../../../../../grammar_mechanics/why-daily-oral-language-d-o-l-doesnt-work/">D.O.L.</a> or D.L.R. “openers” and get 64 no-prep, interactive <strong><a href="../../../../../grammar_mechanics/sentence-lifting-d-o-l-that-makes-sense/">Sentence Lifting</a></strong> lessons-each designed with <strong>basic and advanced </strong>skills. Each of the 64 lessons has <strong>Teacher Tips and Hints</strong> for the grammatically-challenged, <strong>simple sentence diagrams, sentence modeling, grammar cartoons, and dictations</strong>.<strong> </strong>Also get 72 <strong>Grammar and Mechanics Worksheets</strong> to differentiate instruction, according to the results of the <strong><a href="../../../../../../assessments.php">Grammar and Mechanics Diagnostic Assessments</a></strong>.</p>
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		<title>Common Core Essay Writing Terms</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 21 Dec 2011 22:22:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I propose using the CCSS language of instruction for the key writing terms across all subject disciplines in elementary, middle school, and high school. Some of us will have to come down out of our castles and give up pet writing terms that we’ve used for years, and ones that, indeed, may be more accurate than those of the CCSS. But for the sake of collaboration and service to our students, this pedagogical sacrifice is a must. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>“What we’ve got here is… failure to communicate (Cool Hand Luke, 1967).”</strong> A great line from one of Paul Newman’s best movies… but also relevant to, arguably, one of the more controversial strands of the Common Core State Standards (CCSS): writing. Controversial because of three reasons:</p>
<ol>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">As with the reading strand, much of the writing focus is now on the argumentative and informational/explanatory domains, rather than on the narrative.</span></li>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">The new history/social science, science, and technology literacy standards include each of the ten components from the writing strand.</span></li>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">It looks like secondary content area teachers are going to have to start talking to one another. Some tips on beginning this conversation are in a related <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/reading/common-core-content-area-reading-and-writing/">article</a>, but the purpose of the present discussion to make the case for using a common language of instruction.</span></li>
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<p>Much can be said in favor of a common language of instruction in writing. Using the same writing terms permits clear communication among teachers as well as with students. Terminology used by teachers in the subject disciplines can be quite “in-house” and can lead to misunderstanding/misuse out of context. Getting on the same page in terms of what we mean when we say “thesis statement,” for example, will facilitate more productive cross-curricular discussions, expectations, and instructional planning. Besides teachers, students have to scale the academic language barrier for each new teacher and course of study. Some of this may be necessary, but there is little doubt that students who hear and use the same academic vocabulary from grade to grade and course to course are more likely to apply prior content and process knowledge to new academic situations and tasks. Yes, students need to be flexible learners, but teachers also need to be “user-friendly” to their clients.<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/Common-Core1.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-2565" title="Common Core" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/Common-Core1-300x102.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="102" /></a></p>
<h5><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>Common Core Essay Writing Terms</strong></span></h5>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>&#8230;..</strong></span></p>
<p>I propose using the CCSS language of instruction for the key writing terms across all subject disciplines in elementary, middle school, and high school. Some of us will have to come down out of our castles and give up pet writing terms that we’ve used for years, and ones that, indeed, may be more accurate than those of the CCSS. But for the sake of collaboration and service to our students, this pedagogical sacrifice is a must. Following are the first two (of ten) components of the writing strand with their respective purposes and forms, according to language of the <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">CCSS document</a>. The 6-12 Writing Strand uses the same writing terms and a.-e. components, but scaffolds more complex expectations grade to grade. Following is the 6<sup>th</sup> grade Writing Strand with relevant comments regarding additional scaffolded Grades 7-12 components.</p>
<p><strong>CCSS W1 Argumentative Essays</strong></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>Purpose</strong></span></p>
<p>1. Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence.</p>
<p>Comments: Some teachers would distinguish between argument (focus on the writer) and persuasion (focus on the reader), but the CCSS makes no such distinction. Many teachers would prefer using <em>thesis statement</em>, instead of claim, but even the California revisions make no such reference.</p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>Form</strong></span></p>
<p>a. Introduce claim(s) and organize the reasons and evidence clearly.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> Essentially the introduction here with some reference to the organizational plan of the essay. Grades 7-12 scaffold alternate or opposing claim(s): “address” in the California revision (7<sup>th</sup>), “distinguish” (8<sup>th</sup>), make “clear” (9<sup>th </sup>-10<sup>th</sup>), and make “precise” (11<sup>th</sup> &#8211; 12<sup>th</sup>). The focus is on defining the claim(s) in context of competing claims.</p>
<p>b. Support claim(s) with clear reasoning and relevant evidence, using credible sources and demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> The writing terms for the body paragraphs are <em>reasons</em> and <em>evidence</em>. The usual structure of the body paragraph would identify the reason as the topic sentence and evidence as support/development. However, more mature writers could also select complementary claims as topic sentences (See 1a. “claim(s)) with reasons and evidence as support/development. Grades 7-12 replace “clear evidence” with “logical evidence” and add “accurate” to “credible sources. The California revision inserts “counterarguments” at 7<sup>th</sup> grade only. Grades 9-12 add the criteria of fairness and sense of audience to the argument.</p>
<p>c. Use words, phrases, and clauses to clarify the relationships among claim(s) and reasons.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> Grades 7-12 scaffold in “counterclaims” and “evidence.”</p>
<p>d. Establish and maintain a formal style.</p>
<p>e. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> In other words, the conclusion.</p>
<p><strong>CCSS W2 Informational/Explanatory Essays/Texts</strong></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>Purpose</strong></span></p>
<p>2. Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> The language of these standards suggests a variety of writing genre that would come under the umbrella of informative/explanatory, including, but not limited to the traditional essay.</p>
<p>a. Introduce a topic; organize ideas, concepts, and information, using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> Essentially the introduction here with reference to the organizational plan. The California revision includes “or thesis statement” following “Introduce a topic” in Grades 6-12. Specific strategies to be used throughout the body paragraphs to examine the topic are detailed. Additional strategies are scaffolded across the grade levels: “previewing” (7<sup>th</sup>), “broader categories” with “definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect” omitted (8<sup>th</sup>), “to make important connections and distinctions” (9<sup>th </sup>-10<sup>th</sup>), and “each new element build upon that which precedes it to create a unified whole” (11<sup>th</sup> &#8211; 12<sup>th</sup>).</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">Form</span></strong></p>
<p>b. Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> Essentially the same types of evidence in Grades 7-12 that would develop the body paragraphs of the essay/text.</p>
<p>c. Use appropriate transitions to clarify the relationships among ideas and concepts. Grades 11-12 add “syntax” to transitions.</p>
<p>d. Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic. Grades 11-12 add “techniques such as metaphor, simile, and analogy to manage the complexity of the topic.”</p>
<p>e. Establish and maintain a formal style. Grades 9-12 add “objective tone while attending to the norms and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing.”</p>
<p>f. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from the information or explanation presented.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Comments:</span> In other words, the conclusion. Grades 9-12 add two examples of conclusion strategies: “articulating implications or the significance of the topic.”</p>
<p>The author’s<strong> <em><a href="../../../../../../writing/teaching-essay-strategies.html">Teaching Essay Strategies</a></em></strong>, includes<strong> </strong><strong>42 essay strategy worksheets corresponding to teach the Common Core State Writing Standards,</strong><strong> an <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TES1.jpg"><img class="alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-2567" title="TES" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TES1-150x150.jpg" alt="" width="150" height="150" /></a>e-comment bank of 438 prescriptive writing responses with an link to insert into Microsoft Word® for easy e-grading</strong>, 8<strong> </strong><strong>on-demand</strong><strong> </strong><strong><a href="http://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Search/writing+openers/All/All/All/All"><strong>writing fluencies, </strong>8<strong> </strong>writing process essays (4 argumentative and 4 informative/explanatory), 64<strong> </strong><strong> sentence revision</strong></a></strong><strong> </strong><strong>and 64 <a href="../../../../../writing/how-to-teach-rhetorical-stance/"><strong>rhetorical stance</strong></a></strong><strong> </strong><strong>“openers,”</strong><strong> </strong><strong><a href="../../../../../grammar_mechanics/how-to-identify-subjects-and-predicates-2/"><strong>remedial writing lessons</strong></a>, writing posters, and</strong><strong> </strong><strong><a href="../../../../../writing/how-to-save-time-grading-essays/"><strong>editing resources</strong></a></strong><strong> </strong><strong>to differentiate essay writing instruction in</strong><strong> </strong><strong>this comprehensive writing curriculum.</strong></p>
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		<title>The Problem with Dialectical Journals</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Dec 2011 19:25:31 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Dialectical journals have been teacher favorites since literature-based reading pedagogy was popularized in the 1980s. However, this reader-centered instruction creates more problems than it solves. In lieu of dialectical journals, teachers should help students learn and apply the five types of independent reading strategies that promote internal monitoring of the text.]]></description>
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<p>Well, at least we know how our students feel about dialectical journals&#8230; But, how should teachers feel about dialectical journals?</p>
<p>Teachers grapple with how to assign independent reading activities to help students interact with assigned novels or independent reading. Dialectical journals have been teacher favorites since literature-based reading pedagogy was popularized in the 1980s. <a href="../../../../../reading/the-dark-side-of-the-kwl-reading-strategy/">KWL</a> charts and variations upon the same theme have served as into-through-beyond activities within English-language arts, history/social science, and science courses.</p>
<p>At surface level, these forms of reading response seem to assist students in reaching our goals of promoting independent reading comprehension. The thought/hope has been that if we can just get students to access their own prior knowledge of content and story schema, then help students connect these to what the author has to offer, then establish a relevant and personal connection/application to the readers’ lives… students will problem-solve their way to full comprehension and reading enjoyment. The pendulum has clearly swung from the author to the reader side of the equation.</p>
<h5><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>The Problem with Dialectical Journals</strong></span></h5>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>&#8230;..</strong></span></p>
<p>After years of “teaching” this reader-centered, literature-based approach, educators are starting to see the results. Almost 60% of community college students and 30% of university students require at least one year of developmental coursework. And, yes, remedial reading is the chief subject of this remediation.<a href="%20http:/www.communitycollegecentral.org/Downloads/Developmental_Education_TOOLKIT.pdf"> http://www.communitycollegecentral.org/Downloads/Developmental_Education_TOOLKIT.pdf</a></p>
<p><a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/Dialectical-Journal1.jpg"><img class="aligncenter size-full wp-image-2536" title="Dialectical Journal" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/Dialectical-Journal1.jpg" alt="" width="444" height="77" /></a>Good readers may be able to put up some of this reader-centered nonsense and still engage with the text; however, students with reading difficulties desperately need comprehension strategies that will help them understand what the author has to say. The focus on personal relevance impedes comprehension. Tier I and II Response to Intervention readers confuse &#8220;What it means to me&#8221; strategies with &#8220;What the author means&#8221; strategies. The latter is much more important for developing readers (and for that matter, all readers). Some personal application within teacher-guided class discussion makes sense, but should be secondary to teaching the text itself.</p>
<p>In lieu of dialectical journals, teachers should help students learn and apply the five types of independent reading strategies that promote internal monitoring of the text: Summarize, Connect, Re-think, Interpret, and Predict. These SCRIP strategies promote the reader-author conversation and, thus, internal monitoring of text to help students achieve your goal: &#8220;to get them to read and understand what they are reading on their own.&#8221; <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/reading/how-to-increase-reading-comprehension-using-the-scrip-comprehension-strategies/" target="_blank">Here</a> are some SCRIP Reading Comprehension Strategies resources and bookmarks. Having a consistent language of instruction that works for narrative and expository texts is useful.</p>
<p><strong>Mark Pennington, MA Reading Specialist, is the author of the comprehensive reading intervention curriculum, </strong><em><strong><a href="http://www.penningtonpublishing.com/books.php?book=21">Teaching Reading Strategies</a></strong><strong>. </strong></em><strong>Designed to <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TRS3.jpg"><img class="alignright size-thumbnail wp-image-2538" title="TRS" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TRS3-150x150.jpg" alt="" width="150" height="150" /></a>significantly increase the reading abilities of students ages eight through adult within one year, the curriculum is decidedly un-canned, adaptable to various instructional settings, and simple to use—a perfect choice for Response to Intervention tiered instructional levels. Get multiple choice reading assessments, blending and syllabication activities, phonemic awareness and phonics workshops, comprehension worksheets, multi-level fluency passages, 390 flashcards, posters, activities, and games. </strong><strong>Everything teachers need to teach a diagnostically-based reading intervention program for struggling readers at all reading levels is found in this comprehensive curriculum. Ideal for ESL and Special Education students, who struggle with language/auditory processing challenges. 364 pages</strong></p>
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		<title>Why D.O.L. Does Not Transfer to Writing</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 10 Dec 2011 22:01:17 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Psychologists and educational theorists have developed learning theories to explain how new learning and skills are most efficiently mastered and best transfer to other academic activities. Let’s examine the most influential of these learning theories to explain why D.O.L. does not transfer to writing.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">&#8220;I greatly prefer D.O.L. over isolated study because it addresses all the issues at once, not just commas or just capitalization or just subject-verb agreement.  Kids have to consider all those, just as they do when they are writing.&#8221;</span></p>
<p>On the surface, this teacher response sounds reasonable and the practice seems authentic. Students do need to multi-task throughout the writing process. However, does the <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/why-daily-oral-language-d-o-l-doesnt-work/">Daily Oral Language</a> (D.O.L.) instructional practice lead to transfer in student writing? After all, the chief reason why we teach grammar and mechanics is to improve writing.</p>
<p><strong>The short answer is “No. D.O.L. does not transfer to writing.”</strong></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">But first, for the uninitiated, here are the basic Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.) Procedures:</span></p>
<ol>
<li>Teachers write or project two sentences on the board, each with four errors in mechanics and/or grammar. *</li>
<li>Students come up to the board and correct the errors or identify the errors with proofreading marks, one sentence at a time.</li>
<li>The teacher and students discuss the corrections. Some teachers require students to write out the corrected sentences on binder paper or in a composition notebook.</li>
</ol>
<p>*A variation has the teacher pass out a D.O.L. worksheet with the error-filled sentences to each student. Each student writes the corrections and proofreading marks on the worksheet.</p>
<h5><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>Learning Theories Explain Why D.O.L. Does Not Transfer to Writing</strong></span></h5>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">&#8230;..</span></p>
<p>Psychologists and educational theorists have developed learning theories to explain how new learning and skills are most efficiently mastered and best transfer to other academic activities. Teachers studied many of these in their post-graduate teacher-training coursework. Although many of these learning theories would suggest different pedagogical approaches, each would exclude D.O.L. as a viable instructional approach to teaching grammar and mechanics, if transfer to writing is the indeed the instructional goal. Let’s examine the most influential of these learning theories to explain why D.O.L. does not transfer to writing.</p>
<p><strong>Behaviorism</strong></p>
<p>Behaviorists stress practice and reinforcement of skills in a controlled environment. The conditioner is front and center in this theory. Behaviorism has fostered the direct instruction movement with its carefully crafted lesson design and measurable behavioral objectives. Teachers isolate learning variables and provide extensive guided and independent practice.</p>
<p>In contrast, the instructional design of D.O.L. does not isolate or control learning variables. A D.O.L. lesson may include a serial comma error, a subject-verb error, a usage error, and a quotation marks error. The focus is on review, not instruction.  Practice of the skill is minimal, just one per lesson. No wonder that D.O.L. produces minimal transfer of grammar and mechanics concepts and skills to writing, if the behaviorist theory has merit.</p>
<p><strong>Cognitivism</strong></p>
<p>Cognitivists stress the importance of learning through patterns and not isolated events. The content is front and center in this theory. The learner develops new skills within the context of previously learned patterns and the “rules” which define them. Cognitivism has largely shaped the standards-based movement with its carefully designed instructional scopes and sequences.</p>
<p>In contrast, D.O.L. does not teach from patterns or rules. Each skill is practiced in isolation with little generalization. For example, “Titles of movies are to be underlined (italicized), not placed with quotation marks” is taught on its own without connection to the rule: “Titles of whole things are underlined (italicized).” The D.O.L. approach is somewhat akin to teaching reading by learning isolated sight words (a generally discredited instructional practice), rather than through an explicit, systematic phonics program. No wonder that D.O.L. produces minimal transfer of grammar and mechanics concepts and skills to writing, if the cognitivist theory has merit.</p>
<p><strong>Constructivism</strong></p>
<p>Constructivists view learning as a process in which learners actively construct new ideas or concepts based upon their own prior knowledge or experience. The learner is front and center in this theory. Establishing the relevance of the learning to the individual’s intrinsic needs is emphasized to motivate learning.</p>
<p>In contrast, because D.O.L. is simply oral, error analysis, students do not practice the skills in context of their own writing. D.O.L. provides no personal connection to the student’s own expression of ideas. In essence, teachers using D.O.L. purport to teach writing without writing. No wonder that D.O.L. produces minimal transfer of grammar and mechanics concepts and skills to writing, if the constructivist theory has merit.</p>
<p><strong>Informal Learning</strong></p>
<p>Informal learning theorists, such as Robert Marzano, advocate building upon prior knowledge to help students refine and adjust their understanding of previously developed big ideas or concepts. The big idea or concept is front and center in this theory. New learning is only acquired and mastered in the meaningful context of the old and will frequently challenge the construct and understanding of the big idea or concept.</p>
<p>In contrast, D.O.L. does not build or refine the big idea of how grammar and mechanics affect writing. For example, how comma placement affects meaning, how sentence variety emphasizes words and their meanings and not others, how language derivations affect usage or spelling. No wonder that D.O.L. produces minimal transfer of grammar and mechanics concepts and skills to writing, if the informal learning theory has merit.</p>
<p><strong>Connectivism</strong></p>
<p>Connectivists place high importance on developing meaningful connections between ideas and concepts. Connections to other similar learning and skills are front and center in this theory. Much of the brain-based learning, pioneered by neuroscientific research emphasizes the importance of these analogous connections.</p>
<p>In contrast, D.O.L. does not emphasize these skill connections. For example, “Titles of movies are to be underlined (italicized), not placed within quotation marks” is taught on its own without connection to other similar examples, such as “Titles of television shows are to be underlined (italicized), not placed within quotation marks.” No wonder that D.O.L. produces minimal transfer of grammar and mechanics concepts and skills to writing, if the connectivist theory has merit.</p>
<p>Now, good teachers use discussion to make D.O.L. instruction more useful. Some even have added on a writing component to extend the practice, motivation, and personal connection. But, these band-aides simply hide the wounds inflicted by this instructional practice. Our students deserve better grammar and mechanics instruction that will meaningfully transfer to student writing.<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TGM-Thumbnail.jpg"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-2517" title="TGM Thumbnail" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/TGM-Thumbnail.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="300" /></a></p>
<p>For upper elementary, middle school, and high school teachers looking at a stand-alone grammar, mechanics, and spelling curriculum that is aligned to the language strand of Common Core State Standards, please check out the author’s <strong><em><a href="../../grammar-mechanics/teaching-grammar-and-mechanics.html">Teaching Grammar and Mechanics</a></em></strong>. Throw away the ineffective <a href="../grammar_mechanics/why-daily-oral-language-d-o-l-doesnt-work/">D.O.L.</a> or D.L.R. “openers” and get 64 no-prep, interactive <strong><a href="../grammar_mechanics/sentence-lifting-d-o-l-that-makes-sense/">Sentence Lifting</a></strong> lessons-each designed with <strong>basic and advanced </strong>skills. Each of the 64 lessons has <strong>Teacher Tips and Hints</strong> for the grammatically-challenged, <strong>simple sentence diagrams, sentence modeling, grammar cartoons, and dictations</strong>.<strong> </strong>Also get 72 <strong>Grammar and Mechanics Worksheets</strong> to differentiate instruction, according to the results of the <strong><a href="../../assessments.php">Grammar and Mechanics Diagnostic Assessments</a></strong>.</p>
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		<title>Problems with Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.)</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Nov 2011 20:48:52 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.) requires students to multitask and the instruction consists of merely oral review. Both are poor instructional pedagogy and it is no wonder that students retain little of this "instruction."]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I’ve already detailed sixteen reasons <strong><a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/why-daily-oral-language-d-o-l-doesnt-work/">Why Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.) Doesn’t Work</a> </strong>in a related article; however, readers of my blog have added “fuel to the fire” by identifying two more problems with Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.) that merit attention.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Although teachers modify the Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.), to suit their tastes, here are the three basic Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.) Procedures:</span></p>
<ol>
<li>The teacher displays or writes two error-filled sentences on the board. Next, the teacher calls upon students to come up to the board and write corrections and proofreading marks.</li>
<li>The teacher displays or writes two error-filled sentences on the board. The teacher passes out a D.O.L. worksheet with the error-filled sentences. Each student writes the corrections and proofreading marks on the worksheet. Next, the teacher calls upon students to come up to the board and write corrections and proofreading marks.</li>
<li>The teacher displays or writes two error-filled sentences on the board. Students write out the corrected sentences on binder paper or in a composition notebook. Next, the teacher calls upon students to come up to the board and write corrections and proofreading marks.</li>
</ol>
<p>With each of the three approaches, as the students mark the board, the teacher orally reviews the relevant mechanics, spelling, and grammar rules and verifies the accuracy of the sentence edits. With Procedures #2 and #3, students self-edit their own corrections and proofreading marks during this review.</p>
<h5><strong>Problems with the Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.) Instructional Approaches</strong></h5>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">&#8230;..</span></p>
<p>1. With Procedures #2 and #3, students are required to multitask their own sentence edits while watching the board edits and listening to the teacher review the relevant rules.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>Analysis:</strong> Doing two things at once is not good instructional pedagogy. My take is that none of us can chew gum and walk at the same time as well as we can do one isolated activity. Listening is a full time job; discussion is as well.</span></p>
<p>2. Procedures #1, 2, and 3 review the “rules” orally and not in written form.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>Analysis:</strong> Oral review is just not effective instruction and is a key reason why teachers complain that students do not retain the skills reviewed in Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.). After all, the reason we bother teaching mechanics, spelling, and grammar is to help students improve their <em><strong>writing</strong></em>. It makes sense that students should <em><strong>write</strong></em> down relevant rules and examples and then apply these rules to both to <strong>authentic writing</strong>, such as mentor texts (<strong>What’s right?</strong>), as well as to edit error text designed with specific mistakes connected to the rules for the purposes of error analysis (<strong>What’s wrong?</strong>).</span></p>
<p><strong>Instead of Daily Oral Language (D.O.L.),</strong> <strong>I prefer the Sentence Lifting approach</strong> in which students write down (or are provided) the mechanics, spelling, and grammar  &#8220;rules&#8221; and then discuss these in the context of both exemplary mentor text and text that requires error analysis and/or sentence manipulation. As the formative assessment, the teacher dictates sentences which require students to apply each &#8220;rule.&#8221; Students then correct and self-edit their sentences.</p>
<p><strong>For example, if teaching a lesson on gerunds: </strong></p>
<ol>
<li>Students copy down (or are provided) this &#8220;rule&#8221;: A gerund is an “____ing<em> </em>verb” that is used as a noun.</li>
<li>Teacher reads the &#8220;rule&#8221; and elicits examples from students: &#8220;Running is good exercise. &#8221; &#8220;Listening to Mr. Pennington makes me sleepy.&#8221; &#8220;Smoking cigarettes causes cancer.&#8221; Notice the variety of sentence constructions in the examples.</li>
<li>Discuss the use of the gerund in this literary model (a quote by Dave Barry displayed or written on the board): &#8220;Skiing combines outdoor fun with knocking down trees with your face.&#8221; Identify the gerund, discuss the use of the gerund in terms of syntax, meaning, and style. &#8220;What makes this so funny?&#8221; Elicit and discuss possible revisions.</li>
<li>Discuss this sentence (displayed or written on the board): &#8220;A necessary skill has become driving.&#8221; Identify the gerund, discuss the use/misuse of the gerund in terms of syntax, meaning, and style. Elicit and discuss possible revisions.</li>
<li>Dictate this sentence and refer students to look at their &#8220;rule&#8221; for assistance: &#8220;Revise this sentence by placing a gerund at the beginning of the sentence: The product 28 results when you multiply 4 times 7.&#8221;</li>
<li>Display this answer and require students to correct and self-edit: &#8220;Multiplying 4 times 7 results in the product 28.&#8221; Discuss any other possible revisions and set expectations for students to use and highlight gerunds in their writing assignment today.</li>
</ol>
<p><strong>Further Note:</strong> I add on a simple sentence diagram, a student model, and a related cartoon to the instructional mix. Teaching (note use of gerund <img src='http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> ) one mechanics, one spelling, and one grammar &#8220;rule&#8221; with this Sentence Lifting approach takes me 15-20 minutes. I teach Sentence Lifting twice per week to my seventh graders. I use an instructional scope and sequence derived from the new Common Core State Standard Language Strand.</p>
<p>For upper elementary, middle school, and high school teachers looking for a comprehensive grammar, mechanics, and spelling curriculum that is aligned to the language strand of Common Core State Standards, please see the author’s <a href="../../../../../../grammar-mechanics/teaching-grammar-and-mechanics.html"><strong><em>Teaching Grammar and Mechanics</em></strong></a>. This <em>no more than one hour per week</em> program provides 64 no-prep and no-correct, interactive <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/sentence-lifting-d-o-l-that-makes-sense/"><strong>Sentence Lifting</strong></a> lessons-each designed with <strong>basic and advanced </strong>skills. Each of the 64 lessons has <strong>Teacher Tips and Hints</strong> for the grammatically-<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/TGM-Thumbnail1.jpg"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-2494" title="TGM Thumbnail" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/TGM-Thumbnail1.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="300" /></a>challenged, <strong>simple sentence diagrams, sentence modeling, grammar cartoons, and dictations</strong>.<strong> </strong>Also get 72 <strong>Grammar and Mechanics Worksheets</strong> to differentiate instruction, according to the results of the <a href="../../../../../../assessments.php"><strong>Grammar and Mechanics Diagnostic Assessments</strong></a>.</p>
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		<title>Grammar Openers</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Nov 2011 17:47:26 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Following is a brief analysis of the four most common means of current grammar instruction. Teachers will tend to agree with my summary and analysis of the three instructional approaches that they do not employ yet disagree with my characterizations of the one approach that they favor. Afterwards, I will identify and offer a rationale for the one approach that seems most conducive to helping students master the new Common Core State grammar standards: Grammar Openers.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>District administrators and teachers are digging into the newly adopted Common Core State Standards and finding some unexpected buried treasure: the <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/common-core-grammar-standards/">Language Strand</a>. Of course, one’s pirate’s treasure can be another’s curse; nonetheless, this particular treasure seems here to stay, so we might as well figure out how to invest its resources into the lives of our students.</p>
<p>This treasure is English grammar. Now, by <em>grammar</em> we have lumped together a whole slew of things about how our language works: words and their component parts, rules, usage, word order, sentence structure, parts of speech, mechanics, and even spelling. Yes, <em>language</em> is probably a better catch-all term.</p>
<p>Specifically, the Language Strand does not advocate an instructional approach and the Common Core writers go out of their way to affirm teacher autonomy with respect to the <em>hows</em> of instruction. “By emphasizing required achievements, the Standards leave room for teachers, curriculum developers, and states to determine how those goals should be reached…” <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a> (Introduction). However, it doesn’t take a rocket scientist to realize that many of us are going to have to teach grammar differently, given the Standards levels of rigor and specificity. For example, Use a comma to separate coordinate adjectives (e.g., <em>It was a fascinating, enjoyable movie</em> but not <em>He wore an old[,] green shirt</em>). L.7.2. How many of us knew or taught coordinate adjectives before these Standards?<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/Common-Core.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-2480" title="Common Core" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/Common-Core-300x102.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="102" /></a></p>
<p>Much of the burden of grammar instruction is now in the hands of elementary teachers. However, secondary teachers do not get off easily. Although the number of language standards decreases in middle school and high school, the Standards clearly mandate recursive instruction (review), as well as <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/reading/23-myths-of-differentiated-instruction/">differentiated instruction</a>. “Teachers will continue to devise lesson plans and tailor instruction to the individual needs of the students in their classrooms” <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a> (Introduction). Review has always been a given in grammar instruction, but differentiated instruction will be a new approach for many teachers.</p>
<p><strong>Following is a brief analysis of the four most common means of current grammar instruction.</strong> Teachers will tend to agree with my summary and analysis of the three instructional approaches that they do <em>not</em> employ, yet disagree with my characterizations of the one approach that they favor. Afterwards, I will identify and offer a rationale for the one approach that seems most conducive to helping students master the new grammar standards.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>1. Do Nothing</strong></span></p>
<p>Many teachers simply do not teach grammar. Some play the blame game and argue that previous teachers should have done the job. Some do not see the importance of grammar to reading, writing, listening, and speaking and argue that grammar instruction takes away time from more important instruction. Some are simply afraid of the unknown: they never learned it, don’t know how to teach it, and argue that they “turned out alright.” Some just don’t like it.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #800000;">2. Writers Workshop/Writing Process</span></strong></p>
<p>Many teachers went “whole hog” after the <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/reading/dick-and-jane-revisit-the-reading-wars/">whole language movement</a> and <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/reading/the-dos-and-donts-of-differentiated-instruction/">constructivism</a> in the 1980s and have remained loosely committed (although many are about to retire, if the economy would only allow). These veteran teachers wield some influence; however, most will honestly admit that their cherished notions that grammar should best be relegated to a mere editing skill in the last stage of the Writing Process or to a small collection of mini-lessons (should the needs of their student writers so indicate) have simply been pipe dreams. Results of state standard exams and the SAT/ACT clearly attest to this failure. Freshman college writing instructors bemoan the lack of writing skills exhibited by students exposed to this whole to part instructional philosophy.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #800000;">3. Drill and Kill</span></strong></p>
<p>Some teachers do have the set of grammar handbooks, the four file-drawer collection of grammar worksheets pulled from an old copy of Warriner’s, or the online resources of <a href="http://grammar.quickanddirtytips.com/">Grammar Girl</a> and <a href="http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/">OWL</a> (the Purdue University Online Writing Lab) saved in their Favorites. These teachers teach the grammar skills via definition and identification and then drill and kill. “Tonight’s homework is to complete all the odd problems on pages 234-235.” These teachers do “cover” the subject’ however, student writing generally indicates little transfer of learning and test scores reflect only minimal gains.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #800000;">4. Grammar Openers</span></strong></p>
<p>Most teachers have adopted the Grammar Openers approach. Widely known as Daily Oral Language, there are many instructional variations. However, the basics are the following: a quick lesson targeting review of previously “learned” language skills (usually grammar and mechanics) in which students examine short examples of writing riddled with errors. Students practice error identification and the teacher interactively helps students analyze these errors via brief discussion and “reminders” of the rules. Clearly, this approach has significant problems: grammar instruction can’t be relegated to “error fix-a-thons” (Jeff Anderson), review without deep-level instruction is ineffective, the hodge-podge lack of an instructional scope and sequence reflects a shotgun approach that is incongruous with standards-based instruction, the lack of application of these skills in the contexts of reading and writing, and more&#8230; See <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/why-daily-oral-language-d-o-l-doesnt-work/">Why Daily Oral Language Doesn’t Work</a>.</p>
<p><strong>So which of the four is most conducive to helping students master the Common Core State Standards in grammar?</strong> The <strong>Grammar Openers</strong> instructional model seems to offer the most promise. Teachers teach from what they know. Teachers are by nature eclectic and prefer tweaking, rather than starting over. And since the predominant means of grammar instruction is the Grammar Openers model, it seems practical to build on this foundation and encourage such tweaking.</p>
<h5>Here are the positives of the Grammar Openers model:</h5>
<ul>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">It’s consistent.</span> Many teachers cram in huge chunks of ineffective grammar instruction before standardized tests or as intensive grammar units of instruction. Any chance of transfer to writing or oral language developments is doomed by such an inconsistent approach. Rome wasn’t built in a day. Grammar Openers offers the little-at-a-time instructional approach, which does happen to have the best research-base.</li>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">It’s quick.</span> Drill and Kill teachers get so wrapped up in the grammatical complexities, that grammar instruction consumes an inordinate amount of instructional time. All instruction is reductive. We do have other Standards to teach. Grammar Openers provide quick-paced instruction, two or three days per week.</li>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">It’s interactive.</span> Teachers can help students access prior knowledge and teachers can assess levels of whole-class competence through the back-and-forth design of Grammar Openers. The interactive approach can be engaging and does require some levels of accountability. Also, the interactive process can promote exploration, not just practice.</li>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">It involves direct instruction.</span> Writers Workshop/Writing Process purists will simply have to admit that the rigor and specificity of these Common Core State Standards necessitates some of this approach. Whole to part instruction just won’t do this job.</li>
<li><span style="color: #0000ff;">It does involve review.</span> Teachers have long recognized the recursive nature of instruction, particularly in grammar and mechanics. Those teachers who only teach grade-level standards have their heads firmly planted in the sand. Grammar is especially dependent upon scaffolded skills. Students will not learn <em>what</em> an adverbial clause is and <em>how</em> to use it in the writing context without first mastering adverbs and adverbial phrases.</li>
</ul>
<h5>Necessary Tweaks to the Grammar Openers Model</h5>
<ul>
<li>Establish a meaningful scope and sequence of instruction aligned to the Common Core State Standards Language Strand, including a comprehensive review of the asterisked review mandates.</li>
<li>In addition to the direct instruction provided in Grammar Openers, teach to specific diagnostic data and differentiate instruction accordingly. Rather than relying upon solely implicit assessment of what students know and do not know, add on explicit, whole-class <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/assessments.php">diagnostic assessments</a> and teach relative weaknesses via small group or individualized instruction. Here, targeted grammar handbook, online, or worksheet practice (Drill and Kill) in conjunction with writers mini-conferences (Writers Workshop) certainly does make sense.</li>
<li>Move beyond the definition and error identification approach (essential ingredients, by the way) of Grammar Openers to include identification of effective writing skills via Sentence Modeling. There is no doubt that constant exposure to incorrect grammar, mechanics, and spelling reproduces the same in student writing. For example, how many teachers have found themselves questioning how to spell <em>their</em> after years of seeing this spelling mistake in student writing?</li>
<li>Require systematic application of the grammar skills learned in Grammar Openers within the writing context. Students should be required to use what they have learned in their own writing during the Grammar Openers lesson and should be held accountable for applying these skills in short writing strategy practice, as well as on writing process papers. For example, sentence dictations, sentence revision, and sentence combining during the Grammar Openers, paragraph practice using the mechanics, spelling, and grammar skills taught in the Grammar Openers lesson, analytical rubrics which provide specific feedback in these skills rather than a simplistic lumped score on a holistic rubric. A balance of contrived and authentic writing practice/application makes sense.</li>
<li>Provide connected reading resources that demonstrate how mastery of the specific grammar skills adds depth and meaning to what the author has to say. Identification of the grammar is not sufficient. Recognition of how the grammar affects meaning is necessary and provides a meaningful purpose for grammar instruction.</li>
<li>Establish formative assessments to inform and adjust instruction.<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/TGM-Thumbnail.jpg"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-2481" title="TGM Thumbnail" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/11/TGM-Thumbnail.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="300" /></a></li>
</ul>
<p>For upper elementary, middle school, and high school teachers looking for a comprehensive grammar, mechanics, and spelling curriculum that is aligned to the language strand of Common Core State Standards, please see the author’s <a href="../../../../../../grammar-mechanics/teaching-grammar-and-mechanics.html"><em><strong>Teaching Grammar and Mechanics</strong></em></a>. This <em>no more than one hour per week</em> program provides 64 no-prep and no-correct, interactive <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/sentence-lifting-d-o-l-that-makes-sense/"><strong>Sentence Lifting</strong></a> lessons-each designed with <strong>basic and advanced </strong>skills. Each of the 64 lessons has <strong>Teacher Tips and Hints</strong> for the grammatically-challenged, <strong>simple sentence diagrams, sentence modeling, grammar cartoons, </strong><strong>and dictations</strong>.<strong> </strong>Also get 72 <strong>Grammar and Mechanics Worksheets</strong> to differentiate instruction, according to the results of the <a href="../../../../../../assessments.php"><strong>Grammar and Mechanics Diagnostic Assessments</strong></a>.</p>
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		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[For those who still assign writing process essays and/or essay exams and believe that students can and do benefit from comments, the question of How Much and What to Mark on Essays is relevant. Working smarter, not harder and focusing on efficiency and outcomes over pedagogical purity are worthy mantras for effective writing instruction.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Many teachers and professors take pride in red-inking student essays: the more ink the better. Some shift the burden of marking grammar and mechanics errors onto readers or grad students, while retaining the job of marking and grading content, argument, and evidence. Some “grade” essays without comments by using holistic or analytical rubrics, but do not mark papers. Others latch onto familiar excuses: the subjective nature of essay grading, the lack of time, the lack of student writing skills and conveniently avoid the work altogether by giving objective exams.</p>
<p>For those who still assign writing process essays and/or essay exams and believe that students can and do benefit from comments, the question of <strong>How Much and What to Mark on Essays</strong> is relevant. Working smarter, not harder and focusing on efficiency and outcomes over pedagogical purity are worthy mantras for effective writing instruction.</p>
<h5><span style="color: #0000ff;">How Much to Mark on Essays</span></h5>
<p><strong>&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;</strong></p>
<ul>
<li>There is no significant statistical difference in the overall quality of student writing between teachers who mark all mistakes and teachers who mark only a few of the mistakes (Arnold 1964).</li>
<li>Both Harris (1978) and Lamberg (1980) found that voluminous essay comments do not improve student writing.</li>
<li>Shuman (1979) found that most students respond effectively to no more than five error corrections per paper.</li>
<li>Dudenhyer (1976), Beach (1979), Harris (1978), Thompson (1981), and Moore (1992) found that marks on final drafts have little impact on subsequent writing.</li>
</ul>
<p><span style="color: #000000;">In sum, less is better than more, especially on final drafts or essay exams. Moreover, focusing on reader response is essential. In other words, how much the student will absorb and apply.</span></p>
<h5><span style="color: #0000ff;">What to Mark on Essays</span></h5>
<p><strong>&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;</strong></p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Concentrate on Status Errors</span></p>
<p>Hairston (1981) suggests that certain errors are perceived as higher status than others. Hairston found that these errors were seen to be more egregious by most teachers: nonstandard verb forms, lack of subject-verb agreement, double negatives, objective pronoun as subject. Other errors are perceived as low status and may not warrant marking: unnecessary or inaccurate modifiers, use of a singular verb with data, use of a colon after a linking verb.</p>
<p>So, consider concentrating on high status error corrections. Some errors just bother people more than others.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Mark and Explain Teachable Errors</span></p>
<p>Teachers tend to mark errors and comment on content or process. Instead, writing researchers suggest that teachers should comment on both. Choosing to concentrate on errors that can be easily explained to the student with the greater likelihood of producing positive transfer to subsequent writing assignments just makes sense. For example, errors in speaker tag commas can be easily remediated because the rules are relatively unambiguous; errors in commas isolating dependent clauses are harder to remediate because the rules are more ambiguous and context dependent.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Maintain a Balance between Error Correction and Writing Analysis</span></p>
<p>Writing researchers suggest striking a balance in essay response between error correction and writing content/evidence/argument analysis.</p>
<p>Following are key elements of writing discourse for writing teachers to keep in mind to strike this balance:</p>
<ul>
<li>Essay Organization and Development (Introduction, Body, and Conclusion)</li>
<li>Coherence</li>
<li>Word Choice</li>
<li>Sentence Variety</li>
<li>Writing Style</li>
<li>Format and Citations</li>
<li>Parts of Speech</li>
<li>Grammatical Forms</li>
<li>Usage</li>
<li>Sentence Structure</li>
<li>Types of Sentences</li>
<li>Mechanics</li>
<li>Conventional Spelling Rules.</li>
</ul>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Differentiate Instruction</span></p>
<p>Knowing the relative strengths and weaknesses of individual student writers should guide the teacher’s comments. Two data sources are integral to effective writing instruction: <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/reading/free-elareading-assessments/">diagnostic assessments</a> and frequent student writing. The former affords the teacher quantitative data, while the latter provides qualitative data. Each is useful.</p>
<p>For those teachers interested in <strong>saving time</strong> and doing a <strong>more thorough job of essay response and grading</strong>, check out the free <em><a href="../../../../../../writing/the-pennington-manual-of-style-downloadable.html"><strong>The Pennington Manual of Style</strong></a></em><strong><em>. </em></strong>This style manual serves as a wonderful writer’s reference guide with all of the writing tips from the author’s three comprehensive writing curricula: <a href="../../../../../../grammar-mechanics/teaching-grammar-and-mechanics.html"><em>Teaching Grammar and Mechanics</em></a>,<em> </em><a href="../../../../../../writing/teaching-essay-strategies.html"><em>Teaching Essay Strategies</em>,</a><em> </em>and <a href="../../../../../../spelling-vocabulary/teaching-spelling-and-vocabulary.html"><em>Teaching Spelling and Vocabulary</em></a>.<em> </em>The style manual also includes a download of the 438 writing, grammar, mechanics, and spelling comments teachers use most often in essay response and grading. Placed in the Autocorrects function of Microsoft Word® 2003, 2007, and 2010 (XP, Vista, and Windows 7), teachers can access each comment with a simple mouse click to insert into online student essays or print/e-mail for paper submissions. Each comment identifies the error or writing issue, defines terms, and gives examples so that student writers are empowered to correct/revise on their own. This approach to essay comments produces significantly more accountability and transfer to subsequent writing.</p>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Oct 2011 21:20:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Pennington</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[The Common Core State Standards in English Language Arts are divided into Reading, Writing, Speaking and Listening, and Language strands. The Common Core Grammar Standards are detailed in the Language Strand. It is notable that grammar and mechanics have their own strand, unlike the organization of many of the old state standards, which placed grammar and mechanics instruction solely within the confines of writing or speaking standards.

Of course, the writers of the Common Core use the ambiguous label, Language, to refer to what teachers and parents casually label as grammar and mechanics or conventions. To analyze content and educational philosophy of  the Common Core State Standards Language Strand, it may be helpful to examine What’s Good about the Common Core State Standards Language Strand? as well as What’s Bad about the Common Core State Standards Language Strand? chiefly from the words of the document itself.]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The <strong>Common Core State Standards</strong> in English Language Arts are divided into <strong>Reading, Writing, Speaking and Listening, and Language strands.</strong> The Common Core Grammar Standards are detailed in the Language Strand. It is notable that grammar and mechanics have their own strand, unlike the organization of many of the old state standards, which placed grammar and mechanics instruction solely within the confines of writing or speaking standards.</p>
<p>Of course, the writers of the Common Core use the ambiguous label, <em>Language</em>, to refer to what teachers and parents casually label as grammar and mechanics or conventions. To analyze content and educational philosophy of  the Common Core State Standards Language Strand, it may be helpful to examine <span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>What’s Good about the Common Core State Standards Language Strand?</strong></span> as well as <strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">What’s Bad about the Common Core State Standards Language Strand?</span></strong> chiefly from the words of the document itself. <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/Common-Core1.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-2465" title="Common Core" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/Common-Core1-300x102.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="102" /></a></p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">What’s Good about the Common Core State Standards Language Strand?</span></strong></p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Autonomy is Maintained</span></p>
<p>The Common Core Language Strand dictates the <em>what</em>, but not the <em>how</em> of instruction. From the Common Core State Standards introduction:</p>
<p>“The <em>Standards</em> are not a curriculum. They are a clear set of shared goals and expectations for what knowledge and skills will help our students succeed. Local teachers, principals, superintendents and others will decide <em>how</em> the standards are to be met. Teachers will continue to devise lesson plans and tailor instruction to the individual needs of the students in their classrooms.” <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a></p>
<p>“By emphasizing required achievements, the Standards leave room for teachers, curriculum developers, and states to determine how those goals should be reached and what additional topics should be addressed. Thus, the Standards do not mandate such things as a particular writing process or the full range of metacognitive strategies that students may need to monitor and direct their thinking and learning. Teachers are thus free to provide students with whatever tools and knowledge their professional judgment and experience identify as most helpful for meeting the goals set out in the Standards.”</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Differentiated Instruction is Validated</span></p>
<p>The Common Core Language Strand assumes that teachers will need to differentiate instruction to master both grade-level and previous grammatical standards. Again, from the Common Core State Standards introduction:</p>
<p>“Teachers will continue to devise lesson plans and tailor instruction to the individual needs of the students in their classrooms.”</p>
<p>“The Standards set grade-specific standards but do not define the intervention methods or materials necessary to support students who are well below or well above grade-level expectations. No set of grade-specific standards can fully reflect the great variety in abilities, needs, learning rates, and achievement levels of students in any given classroom. However, the Standards do provide clear signposts along the way to the goal of college and career readiness for all students.</p>
<p>It is also beyond the scope of the Standards to define the full range of supports appropriate for English language learners and for students with special needs. At the same time, all students must have the opportunity to learn and meet the same high standards if they are to access the knowledge and skills necessary in their post–high school lives.” <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a></p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Review is Emphasized</span></p>
<p>The Common Core Language Strand identifies specific standards and skills that are “particularly likely” to require review.</p>
<p>“The following skills, marked with an asterisk (*)  are particularly likely to require continued attention in higher grades as they are applied to increasingly sophisticated writing and speaking.” <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a></p>
<p>A considerable number of skills are marked with the asterisks throughout the K-12 language strand. To me, this indicates a basic acknowledgement of the cyclical nature of grammar instruction and the necessity for review and differentiated instruction in grammar, mechanics, and spelling.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Many Language Standards are Specific or Detailed</span></p>
<p><em>Examples of Specific or Detailed Language Standards</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Use a comma to separate coordinate adjectives (e.g., <em>It was a fascinating, enjoyable movie</em> but not <em>He wore an old[,] green shirt</em>). L.7.2.</li>
<li>Form and use verbs in the indicative, imperative, interrogative, conditional, and subjunctive mood. L.5.2.</li>
</ul>
<p>Many Language Standards Integrate Grammar into the Writing Context</p>
<p><em>Examples of Language Standards Emphasizing Application to Writing</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Vary sentence patterns for meaning, reader/listener interest, and style. L.6.3.</li>
<li>Maintain consistency in style and tone. L.6.3.</li>
</ul>
<p>I find a nice balance between focusing on the correctness of usage and application to writing. The standards go out of their way to assert that grammar, mechanics, and spelling are best taught within the context of reading, writing, speaking, and listening.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">The Importance of Grammatical Correctness is Emphasized</span></p>
<p>“To build a foundation for college and career readiness in language, students must gain control over many conventions of standard English grammar, usage, and mechanics as well as learn other ways to use language to convey meaning effectively… The inclusion of Language standards in their own strand should not be taken as an indication that skills related to conventions, effective language use, and vocabulary are unimportant to reading, writing, speaking, and listening; indeed, they are inseparable from such contexts.” <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/">http://www.corestandards.org</a></p>
<p><em>Examples of Language Standards Emphasizing Correctness</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Ensure that pronouns are in the proper case (subjective, objective, possessive). L.6.1.</li>
<li>Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in verb voice and mood. L.8.1.</li>
</ul>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Most Common Core Language Standards are Rigorous</span></p>
<p><em>Examples of Language Standards Emphasizing Rigor</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Produce and expand complete simple and compound declarative, interrogative, imperative, and exclamatory sentences in response to prompts. L.1.1</li>
<li>Form and use comparative and superlative adjectives and adverbs, and choose between them depending on what is to be modified. L.3.1.</li>
</ul>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>What’s Bad about the Common Core State Standards Language Strand?</strong></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Many Language Standards Lack Specificity or Details</span></p>
<p><em>Examples of Vague or General Language Standards</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Spell correctly L.6.2-L.12.2.</li>
<li>Use correct capitalization. L.4.2.</li>
</ul>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Some Common Core Language Standards Lack Rigor</span></p>
<p><em>Examples of Language Standards De-emphasizing Rigor</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Explain the function of phrases and clauses in general and their function in specific sentences. L7.1 (Clauses are not introduced until seventh grade.)</li>
<li>Explain the function of verbals (gerunds, participles, infinitives) in general and their function in particular sentences. L8.1 (Verbals are not introduced until eighth grade.)</li>
<li>Parallel structures are not introduced until ninth grade.</li>
</ul>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">Too Much of the Instructional Burden of the Common Core Language Strand is Placed Upon Elementary Teachers</span></p>
<p>Without getting lost in the specificity, the language strand clearly places the largest burden of grammar, mechanics, and spelling instruction on primary (first, second, and third) grade teachers. At the macro level (after deleting the vocabulary components from the language strand): first, second, and third has three pages of language standards; fourth and fifth has one page; sixth, seventh, and eighth has one page; and ninth, tenth, eleventh, and twelfth has only half of a page.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">The Common Core Language Strand De-emphasizes Spelling Instruction</span></p>
<p>Most notably, spelling gets short shrift in the Common Core State Standards language strand.</p>
<p><em>After third grade, here are the spelling standards:</em></p>
<ul>
<li>Spell grade-appropriate words correctly, consulting references as needed. L.4.2. and L.5.2.</li>
<li>Spell correctly L.6.2.-L.12.2</li>
</ul>
<p>It’s great to know that all American school children will require no spelling standards after third grade. Just wave the magic wand, I guess.</p>
<p>For upper elementary, middle school, and high school teachers looking at a stand-alone grammar, mechanics, and spelling curriculum that is aligned to the language strand of Common Core State Standards, please check out the author’s <a href="../../../../../../grammar-mechanics/teaching-grammar-and-mechanics.html"><strong><em>Teaching Grammar and Mechanics</em></strong></a>. Throw away the ineffective <a href="../../../../../grammar_mechanics/why-daily-oral-language-d-o-l-doesnt-work/">D.O.L.</a> or D.L.R. “openers” and get 64 no-prep, interactive <a href="../../../../../grammar_mechanics/sentence-lifting-d-o-l-that-makes-sense/"><strong>Sentence Lifting</strong></a> lessons-each designed with <strong>basic and advanced </strong>skills. Each of the 64 lessons has <strong>Teacher Tips and Hints</strong> for the grammatically-challenged, <strong>simple sentence diagrams, sentence modeling, grammar cartoons, and dictations</strong>.<strong> </strong>Also get 72 <strong>Grammar and Mechanics Worksheets</strong> to differentiate instruction, according to the results of the <a href="../../../../../../assessments.php"><strong>Grammar and Mechanics Diagnostic Assessments</strong></a>.</p>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2011 17:16:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[DI (Differentiated Instruction), RTI (Response to Intervention), and ELL (English Language Learners) instructional strategies are all validated in the new Common Core State Standards. Common Core writers have clearly gone out of their way to assure educators that the Standards establish the what, but not the how of instruction. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writers of the new Common Core State Standards have clearly gone out of their way to assure educators that the Standards establish the <em>what</em>, but not the <em>how </em>of instruction.</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">From the Common Core State Standards introduction:</span></p>
<p>“The <em>Standards</em> are not a curriculum. They are a clear set of shared goals and expectations for what knowledge and skills will help our students succeed. Local teachers, principals, superintendents and others will decide <em>how</em> the standards are to be met. Teachers will continue to devise lesson plans and tailor instruction to the individual needs of the students in their classrooms.”</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">And more:</span></p>
<p>“By emphasizing required achievements, the Standards leave room for teachers, curriculum developers, and states to determine how those goals should be reached and what additional topics should be addressed. Thus, the Standards do not mandate such things as a particular writing process or the full range of metacognitive strategies that students may need to monitor and direct their thinking and learning. Teachers are thus free to provide students with whatever tools and knowledge their professional judgment and experience identify as most helpful for meeting the goals set out in the Standards.”</p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;">And more:</span></p>
<p>“Teachers will continue to devise lesson plans and tailor instruction to the individual needs of the students in their classrooms.” <a href="http://www.corestandards.org/">http://www.corestandards.org</a></p>
<p>In other words, despite the fact that the Standards put all of us on the same page, in terms of grade-level expectations, teachers retain the autonomy to teach how they see fit.<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/Common-Core.jpg"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-2457" title="Common Core" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/10/Common-Core-300x102.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="102" /></a></p>
<p><strong>Cyclical Instruction</strong></p>
<p>The Common Core State Standards validate the need for review, as well as the cyclical nature of instruction by identifying the skills needed to scaffold higher level instruction and practice. These directions appear throughout the document:</p>
<p>“The following skills, marked with an asterisk (*) are particularly likely to require continued attention in higher grades as they are applied to increasingly sophisticated writing and speaking.”</p>
<p>Teachers advised to skip review of previous grade-level standards and concentrate on the grade-level standards that will be tested, now have firm legs to stand upon when they say “No” to administrators only interested in achieving AYP goals.</p>
<h5>Common Core DI (Differentiated Instruction)</h5>
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<p>Implicit in the mandated review is the need for effective diagnostic assessments to determine <em>what</em> and <em>how much</em> requires re-teaching to establish a solid foundation for grade-level instruction. Using data to impact instructional decisions will help teachers decide which content and skills are best reviewed whole-class and which content and skills are best addressed via small group or individualized instruction.</p>
<p>For example, if initial diagnostic assessments indicate that the whole class needs review of subjects and predicates, whole class instruction and guided practice will certainly be the most efficient means of review; thereafter, if the formative assessment on subjects and predicates shows that half a dozen students have not yet mastered these concepts, small group instruction or targeted individual practice makes sense. However, if initial diagnostic assessments indicate that only half a dozen students have not yet mastered subjects and predicates, it would certainly be advisable to begin with differentiated instruction, rather than waste the time of students who have already mastered these concepts.</p>
<h5>Common Core RTI (Response to Intervention)</h5>
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<p><span style="color: #800000;">Again, from the Common Core State Standards introduction:</span></p>
<p>“The Standards set grade-specific standards but do not define the intervention methods or materials necessary to support students who are well below or well above grade-level expectations. No set of grade-specific standards can fully reflect the great variety in abilities, needs, learning rates, and achievement levels of students in any given classroom. However, the Standards do provide clear signposts alongthe way to the goal of college and career readiness for all students.&#8221;</p>
<p><a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a></p>
<h5>Common Core ELL (English Language Learners)</h5>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>&#8220;It is also beyond the scope of the Standards to define the full range of supports appropriate for English language learners and for students with special needs. At the same time, all students must have the opportunity to learn and meet the same high standards if they are to access the knowledge and skills necessary in their post–high school lives.&#8221;</p>
<p><a href="http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf">http://www.corestandards.org/assets/CCSSI_ELA%20Standards.pdf</a></p>
<p><strong>The author of this article, Mark Pennington, publishes user-friendly teaching resources to differentiate instruction in the fields of reading/ELA. Visit <a href="http://www.penningtonpublishing.com/">www.penningtonpublishing.com</a> for free resources, including 13 diagnostic reading/ELA assessments.</strong></p>
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		<title>How to Dissect a Writing Prompt</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Knowing exactly what the writing assignment requires in terms of the audience, role of the writer, topic and its context, purpose of the essay, essay format, resource text, and key writing direction words are all necessary components of this task. Following is a step-by-step procedure for dissecting a writing prompt. ]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Using Google Maps is a life-saver. However, we’ve all had the experience of misreading or miswriting our destination. If we don’t have the correct or precise destination in mind, we can wind up hopelessly lost. For example, in my town we love trees. You had better carefully input “Pine Tree Street,” not “Pine Tree Court,” “Pine Tree Avenue,” or “Pine Tree Lane.” Otherwise you might be knocking on the wrong door.</p>
<p>The same attention to detail is necessary when reading a writing prompt and planning your writing destination. Learning how to dissect the <strong>Writing Prompt</strong> is the first step in writing an effective essay that will get you where you’re headed. Knowing exactly what the writing assignment requires in terms of the audience, role of the writer, topic and its context, purpose of the essay, essay format, resource text, and key writing direction words are all necessary components of this task.</p>
<p><strong>Following is a step-by-step procedure for dissecting a writing prompt.</strong> These directions are carefully designed to work with the Common Core State Standards Writing 1 (arguments) and 2 (inform or explain) standards with brief explanations why each step is important. Don’t leave out a step or you might wind up on Pine Tree Blvd. in Australia.<a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Scalpel.jpg"><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-2443" title="Scalpel" src="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Scalpel.jpg" alt="" width="258" height="41" /></a></p>
<p>Let’s use the following as our writing prompt example:</p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>Creating a town culture and identity is important to the success of any town. Towns that have clear cultures and identities don’t just evolve-they are carefully planned. Town planners help craft the ongoing vision of a town. Town planners know first-hand the truth of the old adage-“You can’t please all the people all of the time.” Effective planning involves saying “Yes” to some things and “No” to others. For example, many towns have enacted ordinances limiting the number of fast food restaurants. Take on the role of a town planner in a newspaper editorial to persuade businesses and residents that your town needs such restrictions, referring to the reading resource: Pine Town Business Ordinances.</strong></span></p>
<h5><span style="color: #000000;"><strong>How to Dissect the Writing Prompt</strong></span></h5>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>1. WHO</strong></span></p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #800000;">Underline any words which identify the audience or the role of the writer.</span></strong></p>
<p>Good writing is a dialogue between author and audience. Writing is not a one-way task. First, find out who your audience will be. The audience may or may not be clearly stated. Don’t assume that you are writing just to your teacher or grader. Consider your audience’s level of expertise and degree of familiarity with the subject. This will help frame your word choice, which terms need to be defined, your audience’s point of view, and how much prior knowledge you need to tap into to create a coherent dialogue. In the writing prompt example, you should underline “businesses” and “residents,” because these are the two audience members in the writing task.</p>
<p>Look for words that help define your role as the writer. Are you to be an information provider, a thought-provoker, a teacher, a persuader, or ? Are you to remain objective and even-handed to treat all sides of an issue fairly? Or are you to be subjective with your primary task to convince or change your audience’s mind to your position? The answers to these questions will determine your writing voice. Your writing voice is your personal attitude toward the subject of the writing and your audience; it’s the way you come across. Of course, the writing voice must be consistent throughout your writing response so as not to confuse your readers. You never want to send mixed messages to your audience. In the writing prompt example, you should underline “town planner,” because this is your assigned role in writing assignment.</p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>2. WHAT</strong></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>Circle any words which identify the topic, context, or purpose of the writing task.</strong></span></p>
<p>As you read the writing prompt, search for words or phrases that clearly state the topic of the writing. The topic is the main subject about which you are to write, not the detail that explains the subject. For example, in this portion of the writing prompt example: “Many towns have enacted ordinances limiting the number of fast food restaurants” the topic would be “laws” and “fast food restaurants,” not “towns” or “number.” Stick to the main ideas, not the details that are <em>parts of the whole</em> or <em>too general</em>.</p>
<p>The context refers to the necessary background or situation that explains the significance of the topic. In the writing prompt example, the words “culture,” “identity,” and “planned” should be circled because they indicate the necessary context to understand why the topic is important. If your circled topic seems trivial, re-read the writing prompt to ensure that you’ve circled the correct topic.</p>
<p>The purpose of the writing task is the main focus of your writing task. As a writer, you are limited to this focus. You may not <em>want</em> this to be your focus, not you are stuck with this assignment. Keep the focus narrow and don’t “read into” the purpose of the writing task what is not stated. In the writing prompt example, the words “persuade,” and “restrictions” should be circled.</p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>3. HOW</strong></span></p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #800000;">Bracket any words which identify the writing format or the resources to use.</span></strong></p>
<p>The format of the writing task simply means how the writing response is to be shared with your audience. It is the form in which the writing task is to be composed. Again, the writer is limited to this form; there is no choice here. Often the writing format is assumed to be an essay. In the writing prompt example, the writing format is a newspaper editorial. Now, this assumes that the writer knows what an editorial is and is not. Prior knowledge is a harsh master; if you don’t know the characteristics of the format, you are in some trouble. Using the rest of the language of the writing prompt and the clue word “newspaper” will at least get the writer in the right ballpark of the writing format. Bracket the words “newspaper editorial.”</p>
<p>If a reading resource is stated, you should bracket that resource. In the writing prompt example, “Pine Town Business Ordinances” is that resource.</p>
<p><strong><span style="color: #0000ff;">4. DO</span></strong></p>
<p><span style="color: #800000;"><strong>Box any words which identify key writing direction words.</strong></span></p>
<p>Often there is some overlap here. In the writing prompt example, “Persuade” should have been circled in the second WHAT step. Go ahead and box over the circle to emphasize exactly what you are to <em>do</em> as the writer. Knowing the academic language of key writing direction words is critically important. Following are the most often used writing direction words.</p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>Writing directions words for essays designed as argument…</strong></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">1. Analyze means to break apart the subject and explain each part.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">2. Persuade means to convince the reader of your argument or claim.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">3. Justify means to give reasons, based upon established rules, to support your arguments.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">4. Evaluate means to make a judgment about the good and bad points of the subject.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;"><strong>Writing directions words for essays designed to inform or explain…</strong></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">5. Describe means to show the characteristics of the subject to the reader through visual details.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">6. Explain means to make something clear or easy to understand.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">7. Discuss means to talk about all sides of the subject.</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #0000ff;">8. Compare means to show how things are the same, and contrast means to show how things are different. If the writing prompt only mentions compare, you must still do both tasks.</span></p>
<p>Here is a nice teaching summary of the WHO, WHAT, HOW, and DO strategy for dissecting writing prompts for display and reference and some writing prompts for dissection. <strong><a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2011/09/Dissecting-the-Writing-Prompt1.pdf">Dissecting the Writing Prompt</a> </strong></p>
<p>The author’s <em><a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/writing/teaching-essay-strategies.html">Teaching Essay Strategies</a></em>, includes <strong>42 essay strategy worksheets corresponding to the Common Core State Writing Standards,</strong><strong> an e-comment bank of 438 prescriptive writing responses with an link to insert into Microsoft Word® for easy e-grading, 8 </strong><strong>on-demand</strong><strong> </strong><strong><a href="http://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Search/writing+openers/All/All/All/All"><strong>writing fluencies, </strong><strong>8 </strong>writing process essays (4 Common Core Standard informative/explanatory and 4 Common Core Standard persuasive), 64<strong> </strong><strong> sentence revision</strong></a></strong><strong> </strong><strong>and 64 <a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/writing/how-to-teach-rhetorical-stance/"><strong>rhetorical stance</strong></a></strong><strong> </strong><strong>“openers,”</strong><strong> </strong><strong><a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/grammar_mechanics/how-to-identify-subjects-and-predicates-2/"><strong>remedial writing lessons</strong></a>, writing posters, and</strong><strong> </strong><strong><a href="http://penningtonpublishing.com/blog/writing/how-to-save-time-grading-essays/"><strong>editing resources</strong></a></strong><strong> </strong><strong>to differentiate essay writing instruction in</strong><strong> </strong><strong>this comprehensive writing curriculum.</strong></p>
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